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  • #7817

    Nicholas Andersen
    Participant

    :O So much nice art!

    I’ve been away for…a long time, but in the meantime I’ve made something to make up for it!

    A little backstory: The French “stole” a character whose story I was about to write. They created one with similar gimmicks and abilities and pretty much the same name!. So I decided to mix their story and mine into something greater than the sum of its parts.

    You can read The Falcon Writer here!

    #7818

    Lance
    Moderator

    Holy Cow!! This is really good. At least as far as the writing goes on the first few pages.
    Great sentence spacing that fits with the story flow.
    Good wording. Very good wording. 🙂
    Took me a while to check what TV series this story is bases upon.
    I really like French animations. They are never as stupid or down right mind deteriorating as some other nation ones sometimes are.
    If I where to point out anything that I see as improvement worthy then it be the excessive usage of “he” and “she” for almost every character adressation.

    This is long…… Sadly I will have to put this into my to-read-list for later.
    Keep up the awesome work.

    #7827

    Lance
    Moderator

    Been way to long since I copied the arts from the Discord over here.
    Hope I do not miss anything since It is rather hard to find the last entry from here.
    Also in case a good piece of art was not copied over please repost it here yourself.

    henryhp

    mjr2300

    psalmas

    #7828

    Lance
    Moderator

    Kit Carson

    henryhp

    The Revolutionary

    Lt.Ben

    fearless

    #7829

    Lance
    Moderator

    psalmas

    The Revolutionary

    Kit Carson

    Capitaine Gecko

    Cap.SuperJpMega

    #7830

    Lance
    Moderator

    < strong>The Revolutionary

    Tyrud

    Jackobanfield


    psalmas

    Kit Carson

    psalmas

    Lt.Ben

    Winter Fox

    Cap.SuperJpMega

    #7831

    Lance
    Moderator

    Betrayed

    Kit Carson

    psalmas

    mjr2300

    Winter Fox

    The Revolutionary

    #7832

    Lance
    Moderator

    psalmas

    The Revolutionary

    Winter Fox


    Kit Carson



    Lt.Ben

    mjr2300

    Tyrud

    ȟ¤β¤͉̽.£×̛͕£̨̻̅ (uncopyable Discord name)

    #7882

    Nicholas Andersen
    Participant

    😀 I only just saw what you said about the story.
    Thank you Lance! I’ll definetly work on it.

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