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:O So much nice art!
I’ve been away for…a long time, but in the meantime I’ve made something to make up for it!
A little backstory: The French “stole” a character whose story I was about to write. They created one with similar gimmicks and abilities and pretty much the same name!. So I decided to mix their story and mine into something greater than the sum of its parts.
You can read The Falcon Writer here!
Holy Cow!! This is really good. At least as far as the writing goes on the first few pages.
Great sentence spacing that fits with the story flow.
Good wording. Very good wording. 🙂
Took me a while to check what TV series this story is bases upon.
I really like French animations. They are never as stupid or down right mind deteriorating as some other nation ones sometimes are.
If I where to point out anything that I see as improvement worthy then it be the excessive usage of “he” and “she” for almost every character adressation.This is long…… Sadly I will have to put this into my to-read-list for later.
Keep up the awesome work.Been way to long since I copied the arts from the Discord over here.
Hope I do not miss anything since It is rather hard to find the last entry from here.
Also in case a good piece of art was not copied over please repost it here yourself.henryhp
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Okay, so I’ve made some important reworks of the prequel and some of the scenes. I’ve also completed episode 8 and will start 9 on the 4th.
This thing is not only bigger than some of the books that the school made me read for this, my final year of high school, but it’s also so large that it makes google docs LAG.
Just some stuff that I post to my insta page. All about the Aesthetics. Lemme know what you guys think 🙂
So this is self made art because you used a filter on those pictures?
I like the F4 pic. Nice pic. 😉
However, please post only self made pictures, arts of all kinds here.After over a year, it’s done. I finished it! I finished writing The Falcon Writer!
Now all that’s left is the rather lengthy epilogue that’s probably going to take it from 96000 words to 100k+ and around 250 pages total.After over a year, it’s done. I finished it! I finished writing The Falcon Writer!
That’s… impressive! Could you please repost the link to it?
It’s alive, well sometimes at least. 🙂
It is so heartwarming to see you around again Bersimon.
I got the link. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1IPvWjuJ3awNYnow0gFr2Cj_xyiomP6XKPZFohjBRbko/editPersonally I think that it is a good read, just story telling wise.
Great setting description. And… ..
And at this point I am really sorry not to have given any feedback to the author.
@joacobanfield2 Thank you very much for sharing your work here with us.
I still have not finished reading your story but I like it very much.So Bersimon. What is your standing towards this worldly work of art?
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